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November 15, 2017 at 7:02 pm #53424
@Shannon @Emily @Alia sure! By all means, be my guest. 😉
@Aislinn-Mollisong… are you… okay? 😛 What’s a Vytanni?@kate-flournoy may I please read it too? *looks up pleadingly*
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
November 15, 2017 at 7:56 pm #53426@kate-flournoy Ooh, awesome! I’ll read it this weekend at the very least. Thank you! 😉
You can pronounce it however you want.
November 16, 2017 at 11:38 am #53498@kate-flournoy STEEEEEEAMPUUUUUUNK!!!!! *shatters all windows with screech* *ahem* *begins sweeping up glass* I really, really want to read it. But… life. 🙁
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November 16, 2017 at 11:46 am #53503@kate-flournoy Oh, Vytanni Throttlenight is one of our friends on Aetherlight. She has a nasty habit of fainting whenever she sees something epic. It’s kind of turned into a thing, and has been termed “pulling a Vytanni”.
ENTP, Aether-borg Hero with cape obsession and fascination with swords.
https://forums.theaetherliNovember 16, 2017 at 12:18 pm #53511@Aislinn-Mollisong aha, I see. 😛 *belatedly revives you*
So, was there anything that confused you about the story? How well were you able to connect to the characters and their motivations? Was it difficult to piece together the backstory?
@kate-flournoy, I’ll get started on it tomorrow. today is hectic in my household…
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Kapeefer til we're old and greyNovember 16, 2017 at 7:51 pm #53579What’s a Vytanni?
HAAAA that is too funny! Really…she is a very unique character…being a noun suits her. ☺️
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ENFJ-T. Arbitrary. Greet at your own risk. *trips on a rock*November 17, 2017 at 6:18 pm #53715@kate-flournoy 😀 I finished it.
It’s amazing:D
The doc won’t let me make any comments though
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.November 17, 2017 at 6:51 pm #53718Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@kate-flournoy So it looks like I’m not gonna be able to finish reading your story. The part that I read was really good. But you know, school, music, co-op…too much stuff constantly gets in my way.
@seekjustice For now it doesn’t seem like I’m going to be able to beta read your project after all. Last time I checked, it seemed like you had plenty of beta readers, though. I hope that it works out well for you.I’m really sorry about this girls. I’m sure that y’all will get along just fine without me, though. 😜 At least I hope so… Anyway, happy getting-your-projects-beta-read. 😀
*dives into school books* 📚📖
November 17, 2017 at 7:20 pm #53719Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@kate-flournoy Ok good. Thanks!
November 18, 2017 at 9:51 am #53794@kate-flournoy, amazing story! The ending confused me a little bit though.
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