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  • #38090
    Anonymous
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      @daeus There are a few British people on YWW if you’d like to ask if they could help you out.

      *Wanders over to the Scratching quill to turn in my email*

      #38091
      Snapper
      @dragon-snapper
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        @daeus I have sent it to you. Be brutal. Fight hard against poor literature. πŸ˜‰ May the force be with you.
        done

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        #38096
        Emma Flournoy
        @emma-flournoy
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          @Daeus I’m pretty sure I could reasonably manage it. Send it on. πŸ˜€

          If only I did know some British people. That’d be real fun.

          #38115
          Kate Flournoy
          @kate-flournoy
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            DAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! *rushes in and falls on the floor in a weepy mess* HOW DID I MISS THIS??? Is it still open? Can I still reserve a slot? Please??? *begs you from her knees*


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            Daeus
            @daeus
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              @kate-flournoy, you’ve… lost your mind. *shakes head* Well, what do I say? I’ll add you to Emma’s doc.

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              #38121
              Kate Flournoy
              @kate-flournoy
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                It’s been missing for a while, actually. πŸ˜›

                Thanks. Really have no idea how I missed this.


                @Daeus

                Hannah R.
                @his-instrument
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                  @daeus Maybe I could send you the chapter-by-chapter synopsis and the first two or three chapters of my WIP? Then you can just give me an idea of whether or not it’s structured and all that jazz.

                  YA Fantasy Writer
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                  #38158
                  Daeus
                  @daeus
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                    @his-instrument You can give me a synopsis of all the chapters. A google doc would be best.

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                    #38812
                    Daeus
                    @daeus
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                      @winter-rose @graciegirl @dragon-snapper @his-instrument I sent you separate docs you can read the book on. πŸ™‚

                      @that-writer-girl-99 Did you still want to do this? No pressure to. If you’re wanting to get started though, just send me your email.

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                      #38813
                      Daeus
                      @daeus
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                        Ooops. @That_writer_girl_99

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                        #38814
                        Elizabeth
                        @that_writer_girl_99
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                          Don’t you have my email already? From the google doc? @daeus

                          Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.

                          #38815
                          Daeus
                          @daeus
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                            @that_writer_girl_99 Ah, yes. You’re good.

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                            #38865
                            Anonymous
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                              @daeus Hey, would it totally mess your system up if I downloaded the doc, left my comments, and then uploaded it to google docs and shared it with you when I’m done? I don’t like finalizing all my comments until I finish the book. πŸ™‚

                              #38868
                              Daeus
                              @daeus
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                                @winter-rose That would be fine. I would, however, ask that if you do that, please let me know right away if you think there’s anything major that needs fixed (i.e. a character isn’t coming across right, a scene should be structured differently, I have a consistently recurring stylistic problem etc). I’d like to be able to get to major problems right away.

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                                #39467
                                Anonymous
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                                  @daeus Sounds good! Also another question, how many chapters are in it?

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