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    The Happy Bookaholic
    @the-happy-bookaholic
      • Rank: Wise Jester
      • Total Posts: 61

      Hey you helpful wonderful guys out there on the Internet!

      Let’s start this off with some backstory. This year I have two writing goals. I’ve failed the first already (that was an attempt to write ‘something’ every day) but here’s the second: I’ve determined to complete one short story every two months. And yes, my Jan-Feb short story has been written! (Passive voice there but who cares I’m happy)

      I was wondering if you wonderful Internet dudes and dudettes would care to critique this story for me. It’s barely over 8000 words, but I don’t really want to paste the entire text out here. So…I was also thinking about a good way to do this thing. What about entering your email here, and to prevent spam and robots and whatever other email seeking aliens from crashing your account, put it in this format:

      faith hope love 0522 [at] gmail [dot] [com]

      Will that work? (That’s my real email by the way so if you put your email then you’ll get my story from that email.) If anyone has a cooler and more efficient idea please inform.

      Looking forward to your critiques (if any ha)!

      #9183
      Daeus
      @daeus
        • Rank: Chosen One
        • Total Posts: 4238

        @the-happy-bookaholic

        Why don’t you just contact me through my contact form. You can’t attach the file, but I’ll reply to your message and then you’ll have my email address and can contact me directly.

        Contact

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        #9185
        Hope Ann
        @hope
          • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
          • Total Posts: 1092

          @the-happy-bookaholic

          Same here…you can just contact me through my contact form of my website and we can go from there, if that’s not to much trouble. 😉

          http://writinginthelightpublishing.com/

          INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.

          #9187
          Jada Morrison
          @jadamae
            • Rank: Loyal Sidekick
            • Total Posts: 199

            jada mae (at) zoho (dot) (com)

            #9203
            The Happy Bookaholic
            @the-happy-bookaholic
              • Rank: Wise Jester
              • Total Posts: 61

              Thanks a bunch guys!! @daeus, @hope, @jadamae!! Emails coming through, so wait for it!

              #9210
              Hope Ann
              @hope
                • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
                • Total Posts: 1092

                @the-happy-bookaholic Did you contact me through my blog? Because if you did I didn’t get it…which means my contact form isn’t working again. Which is strange, because I did test it…but I might need to go fix or change it.

                INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.

                #23997
                Alia
                @alia
                  • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
                  • Total Posts: 1253

                  book worm (dot) ace (at) gmail (dot) com

                  yeah, I’m late i know

                  WIP - Decisions
                  Kapeefer til we're old and grey

                  #24137
                  Sarah Hoven
                  @sarah-h
                    • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                    • Total Posts: 669

                    @the-happy-bookaholic You have a new volunteer. 🙂

                    #24143
                    The Happy Bookaholic
                    @the-happy-bookaholic
                      • Rank: Wise Jester
                      • Total Posts: 61

                      Email please? @sarah-h

                      #24153
                      Mark Kamibaya
                      @mark-kamibaya
                        • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                        • Total Posts: 318

                        mark (dot) kamibaya (at) gmail (dot) com

                        I blog on story and spiritual things at mkami.weebly.com

                        #24185
                        Sarah Hoven
                        @sarah-h
                          • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                          • Total Posts: 669

                          @the-happy-bookaholic Oh, sorry. I meant that Alia was volunteering, but she forgot to tag you. But, actually, I would really like to volunteer as well, so here is my email:
                          Sarah (_) h (742) (at) icloud (dot) com. I hope I did that correctly. 🙂 It’s been a whole year since this topic started; are you still open for beta readers, or am I too late?

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