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Haha *snorts* Gasp. Wow! *chokes on apple that she’s eating* cough, cough. Oh my goodness. You guys are so creative. I’m terrible at limericks. And I used to have to write them all the time for my school work. 😀
Once upon a time there was a tinker,
Everyone called him quite the thinker,
He thought without pausing,
Til his smell was appalling,
Now everyone calls him quite the stinker.I was out for a walk with my dog.
But we got lost in the fog.
Oh what should I do?
I was feeling so blue.
So I just sat down on a log.@bluejay, Haha, I like it! You’re not terrible at limericks at all. 🙂
You guys are ALL very creative! Wow— who knew this forum was full of poetic geniuses! 😉
@Gretald, I would just switch up the syllables a bit in your limerick, though it does fit the form. Yours wasThere was a girl called Connie,
Whose sister’s name was Bonnie,
She was so wee,
That she will be,
Always with their Mommy.Try:
There once was a girl named Connie,
Who had a small sister named Bonnie.
This girl was so wee
That she’ll always be
Forever, for always, with Mommy.That’s really cute, by the way— I have a few siblings like that. 😉
@kate-flournoy, Ooo! I like it. By the way, you don’t have to ask about giving me feedback. Feedback helps me grow as a writer, and I’m always looking for people who are willing to give it. 🙂
Well hey, that’s good to know @gretald! That’s how I am too— but I just wanted to make sure I didn’t offend anyone who maybe didn’t feel that way. 😉
*clears throat importantly, glares around with red pen poised quivering in clenched fingers* Next?
😉
There once was a garbageman fair
Who had sparkling teeth and blond hair
He never quite knew
Why young ladies said “Eeew”
And the ones that really liked him were rare.
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