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    Daeus
    @daeus
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      Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.

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      katie
      @lifeofkatie
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        @daeus – so I definitely like the color better! 😀😀 the only thing is, Is there a way to make the text a little bigger, so it’s more readable and “eye-catching”?

        #52318
        Daeus
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          @lifeofkatie On the button?

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          Daeus
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            @lifeofkatie I think I’ve got it fixed.

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            #52321
            Anonymous
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              @daeus, that looks way more professional. I like it a lot!

              #52324
              Anonymous
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                @daeus The tags worked for me. I got an email for both.

                #52325
                katie
                @lifeofkatie
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                  @daeus – it looks fantastic! Great job!! 😀😀 ice cream: 🍨🍨🍨

                  #52326
                  Anonymous
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                    @daeus Oh and it looks much better now. Looks good!

                    #52350
                    Jane Maree
                    @jane-maree
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                      @Daeus much better! I haven’t got anything else to note about that. 😀 *thumbs up*

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                      Ingrid
                      @ingridrd
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                        @daeus  Ah, there we go.  Nice job.  🙂

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                        Kate Flournoy
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                          @Daeus once again I’m late to the party… everything looks great. Very professional. Nothing to criticize; good work. 😉

                          Anonymous
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                            @daeus Sorry this is delayed, but the new button looks great!

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