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    EpicAddie2
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    @shannon I actually have a character named Hazel πŸ™‚

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    Shannon
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    @epicaddie2 That’s cool! *sighs* I love that name, especially when it’s associated with green eyes for some reason.

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    EpicAddie2
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    @shannon I think my Hazel has brown eyes… *shrugs* I should probably know this.

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    Shannon
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    @epicaddie XD Glad you at least remember her name ; )

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    @shannon πŸ˜‰

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    Ingrid
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    @shannonΒ  Hmmm…for some reason the link isn’t working for me.Β  Could you try posting it again?

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    Shannon
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    Sure, here it isΒ https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vTdt5s2PG2F-PmcisOdHk19OxfFQ9TMa8PwY4VOvIpA/edit?usp=sharing

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    #53486

    Ingrid
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    @shannon Just wanted to let you know that I read and critiqued your story this morning.Β  Hopefully I wasn’t too harsh… πŸ™‚

    You did a fantastic job!Β  Let me know if you have any questions about my critiques.Β  πŸ˜‰

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    Shannon
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    @ingridrd Awesome!

    I got an email about your comments. Thank you so much for doing this for me! I read over them in the email, and (although I haven’t looked at them in context) I can already tell that you definitely weren’t to harsh. Trust me, not much bothers me. Thanks again!!! I’ll let you know if I have any questions 😊

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