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  • #11915
    Adry_Grace
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      Now personally, I think he’s an idiot, but he’s also incredibly dashing.


      @Daeus
      Ha! That made me laugh. Drake sounds like a great character. Stupid but dashing characters are my favorites. πŸ™‚


      @kate-flournoy
      lol thank goodness. i think i annoy my friends sometimes…


      @vanna
      It’s amazing how what goes on during the obsessive-brainstorming stage isn’t it?

      #11920
      Daeus
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        Oh, and it’s interesting too, because the girl he rescued also changed as soon as he arrived on the scene. Before, she had been a bit vague and I had doubts whether she might end up as a cliche. She seemed too quiet at times, but after Drake appeared, I saw that she was strong willed as well as perceptive as well as somewhat meek (which is an interesting combination).

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        #11921
        Vanna
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          @Adry_Grace Oh yes, the stories I could tell. Especially considering my personal obsessive-brainstorming has been around since I was twelve. It’s sheer size is getting ridiculous, but I’m not going to lie, watching it grow and change into something that I think is actually worth writing down has been pretty amazing.

          #11923
          Vanna
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            @Daeus That does sound like an interesting combination. It’s sometimes the characters with the unlikely combination of traits that end up being among the most fascinating. Do you have a title for the story?

            #11930
            BlueJay
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              When I read the bit that you posted @adry_grace about Eon and Egypt, I thought of her as a love interest. πŸ™‚ If that’s any help with deciding what to make her.

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              #11941
              Daeus
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                @vanna Yeah, I just wish all my characters could be that unique. The books called Edwin Brook – That’s my MC’s name. It’s got a deep plot. I probably bit off more than I could chew when I started, but I think I can handle it now.

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                #11942
                Adry_Grace
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                  @vanna I agree!! It would be amazing to be able to physically see a story grow somehow, to see it grow from this little town with a couple characters I thought would fit well to an entire world in catastrophe and all these characters with different relationships with each other going in and out of plot. Man that would be cool to see…


                  @bluejay
                  Okay! Thanks for letting me know. If anything, I know that I’m doing something right if I continue to write their relationship that way, which is likely.

                  #11948
                  Vanna
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                    You have a really cool name @Daeus . I love complex plots. I’d like to write something like that eventually, but I figured it would be best to start with something simpler for my first attempt. Great to hear you got a handle on it! πŸ™‚ So are you editing it now?

                    #11950
                    Daeus
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                      @vanna Well, I’m actually on the third to last chapter. I’m hoping I can finish it and give it the first round of editing by sometime in July then tidy it up some more and hopefully get it published before the end of the year.

                      The complicated plot has been – well, complicated, but it can be good to stretch yourself.

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                      #11980
                      Hope Ann
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                        I’ve one character who was only supposed to be in a scene, as part of background and setting for another character. But as soon as he slammed through the inn door, I knew he’d need a subplot of his own. He developed surprisingly swiftly…I hardly had to plan it. Just figure out how to get him a decent place in the story, which ended up not being too hard. πŸ˜‰

                        INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.

                        #11985
                        Kate Flournoy
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                          Hope Ann
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                            @Kate-Flournoy No, Captain Tor

                            INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.

                            #12009
                            Anna Brie
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                              @hope I can why you needed to enlarge Captain Tor. I like him.

                              BTW, I had given The Final clash to one of my brothers to see what he thought and a few days ago I heard him reading it to my other younger brother (the one who writes). I think he must really like it.

                              #12010
                              Kate Flournoy
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                                Sweet. Yeah, I can definitely see why you wanted to enlarge on him… πŸ˜‰

                                Hope Ann
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                                  Yes, he’s the first character who practically wrote himself. πŸ˜‰

                                  INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.

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