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  • #51382
    Joy
    @dekreel
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      Well it seems, @catwing,

      Either one of us is wrong,

      Or we’re just different

       

      I guess that makes sense;

      You’re a flying cat, and I’m

      A fox-like creature

      • This reply was modified 6 years, 4 months ago by Joy.

      You can pronounce it however you want.

      #51385
      Catwing
      @catwing
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        If you please then,

        the tagging symbol can not

        count in haiku

         

        But @dekreel I saw

        Or we’re just diff-e-rent.

        Six syllables

        IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

        #51390
        Joy
        @dekreel
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          And I also saw

          Only four syllables in

          Six syllables

           

          But, @catwing, I wish

          That we quarrel no longer.

          It’s a silly fight!

          You can pronounce it however you want.

          #51394
          Catwing
          @catwing
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            It is indeed true.

            But fighting in haikus

            is always silly

             

            But I meant to say

            seven, but only I got

            confused also

            IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

            #51395
            Catwing
            @catwing
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              @dekreel a truce

              sounds nice, perhaps we

              can also rhyme?

               

              Adding to the mix

              of crazy haikus the

              element of poem.

              IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

              #51423
              Leumeister
              @leumeister
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                Good grief @catwing.

                You’re on a roll. And I see

                your point on spaces

                 

                It seems that double

                spacing is now the default

                setting for all posts.

                #51424
                Leumeister
                @leumeister
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                  Also, I do not

                  agree with your idea

                  for rhyming haikus.

                   

                  It ain’t the point. 😛

                  #51434
                  Anonymous
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                    @dekreel, I have written one haiku in my entire life….and I’ll find it sometime and post it.

                    #51643
                    Catwing
                    @catwing
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                      @dekreel that is not,

                      what I meant, I meant to

                      also say poem.

                       

                      As in you can talk,

                      in haikus or poem,

                      Not like a combo.

                      IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                      #51666
                      Louise Fowler
                      @perfectfifths
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                        @Catwing, so you
                        Mean we could also speak in
                        Other poem types?

                        For example:

                        There once was a Kingdom called Pen,
                        With dragons and catwings and men,
                        T’was the bestistest site,
                        On the web by right.
                        A place you could make lots of new friends.

                        • This reply was modified 6 years, 4 months ago by Louise Fowler.

                        Currently reading Les Miserables

                        #51669
                        Aislinn Mollisong
                        @aislinn-mollisong
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                          @perfectfifths THE BESTSISTEST!!!!!

                           

                          Guys, I think this should be our national (or whatever) poem.

                          ENTP, Aether-borg Hero with cape obsession and fascination with swords.
                          https://forums.theaetherli

                          #51673
                          Joy
                          @dekreel
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                            @perfectfifths nice one!

                            With the clear exception:

                            It’s not a haiku!

                             

                            Well, it’s still okay!

                            I agree with Mollisong

                            Hats off! Paws on heart!

                            You can pronounce it however you want.

                            #51679
                            Louise Fowler
                            @perfectfifths
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                              @aislinn-mollisong lol, thanks! 😀


                              @dekreel

                              Yes, I do know that,
                              I was merely doing
                              What Catwing thought of.

                              That is, speaking in
                              Other forms of poem be-
                              sides a Haiku form.

                              That particular
                              Form of poem is called a
                              Limmerick, Dekreel.

                              Currently reading Les Miserables

                              #51683
                              Anonymous
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                                @dekreel Here is the only one I have ever done…and I did it 3 years ago. So ya, kinda out-dated.

                                A red tanager

                                Swooping and flying away

                                From the cat’s cruel lear

                                #51684
                                Anonymous
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                                  @perfectfifths, that limerick is awesome! I definitely agree w/ @aislinn-mollisong!

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