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  • #59329
    Rochellaine
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      Ok, I’m going to try to post a link to a google document with a couple of my poems.  If it works… well, we’ll see.

      It might or might not be here.

      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

      #59330
      Rochellaine
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        Yes! It did work.  So, I think you should be able to read the poems by clicking on the link.

        Note please, these are not poetry, they’re poems.  There’s a difference.  🙂


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        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

        #59336
        The fledgling Artist
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          @rochellaine
          How would you define the words poetry and poem?
          In what ways would you say they are different and in what ways are the the same? I’m curious 🙂
          Oh yeah I like your poems by the way! (I did read them haha) I think the 2nd one was my favorite though I like them all.

          and I was so confused

          #59342
          Rochellaine
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            @notawriter Well, I was kind of thinking along the lines of, A poem is a piece of writing, usually defined as something with rhyme and rhythm.  Poetry has a much broader meaning, which includes something beautiful and elegant which appeals to the higher senses.  My poems certainly do not do that! 🙂  So yes, technically you can’t say there’s a difference between poems and poetry, but I was trying to convey that my poems are not meant to make people think, or to sound sweet and lovely.  They are meant to make people laugh! 🙂

            Thanks!  I like the second one a lot too.  I usually write the poems and then read them afterward to laugh and say, “Did I really write that?!” I liked describing the dragon’s ideals and way of life. 🙂

            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

            #59347
            Jenna Terese
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              @rochellaine I read your poems. I really liked them! (and I love using a British accent😉)

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              #59371
              The fledgling Artist
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                @rochellaine
                Aha that makes sense to me 🙂 Thanks!

                and I was so confused

                #59381
                Anonymous
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                  @rochellaine I really like them! They were a lot of fun to read and made me smile. Thank you for sharing!

                  #59386
                  Skredder
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                    @rochellaine Oh wow! Those are awesome and definitely fun to read! And since they are poems there was no way that I couldn’t read them aloud. 🙂

                    "For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."

                    #59459
                    Sam Kowal
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                      @rochellaine XD XD XD 😀 😀

                      Those are hilarious

                       

                      I thought no one

                      Would know I was reading these poems

                      But upon reading these tales

                      I quaked such a gale

                      That all of my family was drawn by my laughter

                      Like animals called, sought the source of such clatter

                      And upon seeing the poems, only left after

                      They assured themselves nothing was truly the matter

                       

                      XD Wow, that’s bad. Nothing like yours. Good job, anyway 😀

                      *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
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                      #59479
                      Rochellaine
                      @rochellaine
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                        @jenwriter17 Thanks! I like using a British accent too, but I mostly do it when I’m singing, rather than talking.  🙂

                        @radically-surrendered and@skredder I’m glad you liked them!  As I said before, their sole purpose is to make people laugh. 🙂


                        @sam-kowal
                        Hahahaha!!! 🙂 Which one did you like best?

                        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                        #59486
                        Louise Fowler
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                          @rochellaine Oooh, my favourite is the dragon one, too, and then the giant ones. 😀 These are great!

                          Currently reading Les Miserables

                          #59532
                          itisastarrynight
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                            @rochellaine Those were fantastic! I’m interested myself learning to do poetry or poems etc but I just don’t have a way with words. Yours were great, though! Keep it up 😉

                            I can't believe it's not butter!

                            #59533
                            Kylie
                            @kballen
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                              @rochellaine These are amazing:) 🙂 🙂

                              Harry Potter forever!!!!

                              #59556
                              Rochellaine
                              @rochellaine
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                                @perfectfifths and @kballen Thanks!  I think my favorite is actually the giant one because the story is more unusual (can I use that as a synonym for “totally weird”?), but I do like a couple of lines from the dragon poem a lot, such as “I faltered for a moment but/began to argue with the nut,” because it’s so crazy.


                                @itisastarrynight
                                I’m glad you liked them!  I try to keep it up, but sometimes my poems turn out great, and sometimes they just won’t write themselves!  I write prose a lot more often. 🙂

                                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                                #59562
                                itisastarrynight
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                                  @rochellaine Yes, of course. Being creative isn’t always a walk in the park. No sweat  🙂

                                  I can't believe it's not butter!

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