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    Josiah DeBoer
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    @epicaddie2 – this is really cool. I felt like the ending was a touch abrupt. I would have loved a bit of internal conflict at the end. But other than that, 10/10


    • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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    @josiahdeboer Thanks! The ending was a bit abrupt, I guess. I might continue it, but I really need to start working on my 2nd draft again. I haven’t worked on it in a couple months.

    The sort-of-official KP Ranger

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