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  • August 12, 2017 at 9:51 pm #40200
    SeekJustice
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      @catwing I can imagine it playing out somewhat like the climax of Wall-E where the captain fights his ship’s wheel!

      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

      August 12, 2017 at 9:53 pm #40202
      Catwing
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        @seekjustice Ah, yes. Wall-E!

        IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

        August 12, 2017 at 9:53 pm #40203
        SeekJustice
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          @Emily, it wasn’t until a year or so that I actually began to pursue messages and themes in my writing. But it is important!

          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

          August 12, 2017 at 9:54 pm #40208
          Anonymous
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            Yes…I now think that I understand that. @seekjustice

            August 15, 2017 at 9:54 am #40728
            Gracie
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              @Emily Zikers, I am late, late, late. So sorry. XD
              And it seems that @SeekJustice and @that_writer_girl_99 have already said everything. XD Oi.

              I will add to what SeekJustice mentioned about pursuing a theme/message that means something to you cuz here’s the thing: if you’re bored/not interested/ not connecting with your story, readers are going to be bored/not interested/and won’t connect with your story.

              Write about stuff that means something to you.
              So my two cents: listen to them. 😛

              *is probably geeking out about something*

              August 15, 2017 at 10:26 am #40730
              Anonymous
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                That makes sense @gracigirl. Thanks for your input.

                August 15, 2017 at 3:36 pm #40817
                Anonymous
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                  Oops! I just realized I made a typo in your tag @graciegirl

                  August 15, 2017 at 3:41 pm #40819
                  CK4always
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                    @Emily Hmm… I’ve been there before. Very annoying. What I think you should do is keep going, but add a few plot twists. Those are not only fun, but can get pretty cool 🙂

                    Just my input on this.

                    August 15, 2017 at 3:45 pm #40823
                    Anonymous
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                      Thanks @ck4always! That is a good suggestion.

                      August 15, 2017 at 3:48 pm #40826
                      CK4always
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                        @Emily Anytime 🙂 It’s happened to my before (with a story called Chocolate Milk).

                        August 15, 2017 at 3:50 pm #40829
                        Anonymous
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                          @ck4always Chocolate milk??? Sounds interesting. 😛

                          August 15, 2017 at 5:00 pm #40832
                          CK4always
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                            @Emily It’s a detective story 😛 It’s actually pretty cool (at least, I think is, and so do my sibs). If you want, I can tell you about it 🙂

                            August 15, 2017 at 5:01 pm #40834
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                              @ck4always Sounds neat! I’d love to hear about it. How many siblings do you have?

                              August 15, 2017 at 5:05 pm #40838
                              CK4always
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                                @Emily Awesome! I’ll have to give it to you tomorrow (don’t really have time right now)
                                Can’t really answer that, but a few.

                                August 16, 2017 at 8:28 am #40907
                                Gracie
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                                  @Emily XD No problem!

                                  *is probably geeking out about something*

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