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    @hope…I think @dragon-snapper‘s right. The first sounds best. A little less dramatic.

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    Emma Flournoy
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    @hope Of those I like the first best. I think any version does sound sort of over-dramatic/slightly cheesy, since you asked. *brutally honest grimace* But of those three choices I think the first is best.

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