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    Shannon
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    @seekjustice I need to give it some thought, and then I will get back to you.

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    Emily
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    @seekjustice I am still not able to view the story. I sent you a request for access. My email begins violinistforlife just so you know

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    SeekJustice
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    Emily
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    @seekjustice now it is working! Thanks!

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    Shannon
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    Hey @seekjustice, I made a few comments, but I don’t really have much to say. You are a great writer my friend!

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    Emily
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    What an amazing story! I bet you will win that competition @seekjustice. When is it?

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    Elizabeth
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    My goodness. I wasn’t expecting to be so moved by your story @seekjustice, it’s very good!

    There’s a couple of tiny edits I’d like to suggest, but the document is currently set in “view only”–if you change it so that I can comment, I’ll be able to leave those suggestions on the doc and you can decide for yourself if you want to keep them.

    It’s very good!

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    Shannon
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    @that_writer_girl_99 You might be able to send her an email requesting access. That’s what I had to do.

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    Elizabeth
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    Aha. Good point @shannon

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    SeekJustice
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    @shannon, thank you! it didn’t give this story a whole lot of thought when I was writing it, it just came out and I really, really liked it.
    @emily, the competition deadline is the 31st August. And thank you, 😀
    @that_writer_girl_99 and thank you! I wasn’t expecting to be so moved by writing it either!

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    Emily
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    Happy to do it @seekjustice!

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    Alia
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    @seekjustice, If you’re still in need of readers, then I would love to

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    SeekJustice
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    @alia, certainly! The link is further up on the page and should still be working. You can either comment on the piece or you can make some comments here, I don’t mind.

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