A New Synopsis For Edwin Brook

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  • #41278
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    Daeus
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    @emma-flournoy Here’s another option.

    When your fate overwhelms you, where can you turn?

    #41318
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    Daeus
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    @kate-flournoy @his-instrument @graciegirl @hope @winter-rose Wanted to see if there were any last thoughts on this.

    #41330
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    Kate Flournoy
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    @Daeus *emerges from dark library blowing dust from her hair and wiping her hands* I’m sorry, I’ve been horribly remiss in keeping up with things.

    I love ‘When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?’ Like, really really love it. Lovely. Go for it.

    *vanishes in piles of dusty scrolls again*

    #41331
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    Daeus
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    @kate-flournoy *puts on black cape* It shall be done!

    #41334
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    Hope Ann
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    @daeus love the β€˜When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?’ hook. Much better than the others. πŸ˜‰

    #41465
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    Gabrielle
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    @daeus Sorry it took me forever. πŸ™‚ I like the second synopsis, and the “When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?” line. I kinda think that both synopsis thingys (What is the plural of synopsis?) could be more specific, but I don’t have much experience with writing such things so perhaps it is supposed to be that way. If so ignore me. πŸ™‚

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    Emma Flournoy
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    @Daeus Yuppo, the former. When fate seeks to destroy you.

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