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Journey to Maldroc
Gavryn awoke to his sister, Autumn, shaking his arm. “Gavryn, it’s time to go to school!” She cried. “We could be late!”
“Sorry, Autumn… just… really… tired.” He replied, his voice groggy and shaky. He got out of bed and found his school things, put them in his backpack, and walked down the hall to eat breakfast. He was always quick at getting ready.
“Gavryn, can you take the trash out to the incinerator? Josyia already left for school.”
“Sure thing, Mom.” Gavryn replied. He needed a minute away from others to think.
“Thank you, Gav.” She replied. [Read more…]