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  • Daeus posted an update 6 years, 5 months ago

    @jess-penrose @lady-iliara @catwing

    Hi, I’m currently working on a mini-course on the topic of show don’t tell. I have four lessons with homework for each lesson and it’s all complete and ready to go. Before I release it though, I was hoping to get a last set of eyeballs on it. I just want to make sure everything flows smoothly and is easy to understand.

    Anyway, I didn’t know if you had any time for this, but if you did, it would basically be the same as taking the course when it comes out, only it will be just /slightly/ less edited. I thought if you were into the show don’t tell principle it might interest you.

    So just let me know if you would be interested in that.

    Thanks. 🙂

    • This sounds cool! I would love to do that! 👍🏻

    • Would it be possible for me to send comments about the lessons in an email? Or would it be simpler for me to just get the Google Docs app?

      • An email is fine by me, though google docs is a seriously sweet tool so you should sign up for it anyway. 😛

    • *covers eyes* Eeek! No! I wish to kept my set of eyeballs! *silence* *cricket chirps* *eats cricket* Oh, that’s not what you meant is it… *flips through the new catwing ambassador handbook* It’s just an expression. I’m NaNoing… *looks at her paw where a watch should be* Yeah, I got time. *nods* Yep, I can help. I need to work on showing instead of telling anyway. So I should know if something doesn’t make sense. Because it wouldn’t make sense to me… *cough* Yay! 😸

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